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 Post subject: My first Montage
PostPosted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 2:23 am 
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My first Montage
Comment and Rate pls
not best my first xD....
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CIv4PUjURxY

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 Post subject: Re: My first Montage
PostPosted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 10:53 am 
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I'll said what I think about you're video.. It's not bad for a first

-The intro is boring and long...
-Your smooth isn't good... = The video "jerk"... and we see the Xfire logo on the height, for Smooth, use fraps :up:

-Don't film 1v1, it's boring and long. Or if you want to make an 1v1 video, make just an 1v1 video with titled "Fash vs Wisley" (for example)

-Cut your video.... 1:22 we wait 10sec to see you kill someone... and it's an example, we can see a lot of clips with the same problem.

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 Post subject: Re: My first Montage
PostPosted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 11:12 am 
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Boring... the musics make you sleep and doesn't fit at all to the video. Try to avoid those kind of "failures" at 0:19.

And as Legend said, you shouldn't record a 1vs1 and insert it between the public kills.

6/10, because it is your first. :up:

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 Post subject: Re: My first Montage
PostPosted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 11:20 am 
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Wesley, good job for your first montage. :wink:

Btw.: "Ich hab Mukke an, ich hör nix" ... :lmao:

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 Post subject: Re: My first Montage
PostPosted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 11:27 am 
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nice first try and i kinda like the music^^

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 2:09 pm 
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Here we go:

- The first 30 Seconds were totally unnecessary and nobody cares if it is Engine so you could cut this part out. Also its "Wesley Presents" not "Wesley Present"

- The xfire navigation bar makes it look bad, try fraps next time.

- the flight through the Map was boring and unnecessary

- I liked how you synched the kills to the music, it's very dynamic. Just try to cut out all the long stuff before and after a kill.

- The music in general is really boring and monotonous. Try something else next time

- Also don't end your montage with "thanks for watching" you just don't do that

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 03, 2010 2:23 pm 
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Wesley in the Video u wrote: Its my FRIST Montage. (First)

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I'm sorry but i thought it was kinda boring.

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